Comments on: Review: The Darkest Part of the Forest

By: meghanmmurphy

meghanmmurphy — Fri, 25 Sep 2015 22:26:12 +0000

The characters were very strong, and very well written, that was good. I just wish that the storytelling could have been that good too!

meghanmmurphy — Fri, 25 Sep 2015 22:23:34 +0000

It is, and the content was great, it just wasn’t told well. It’s too bad really!

aentee @ read at midnight — Fri, 25 Sep 2015 08:18:12 +0000

Sorry to hear that the execution didn’t live up to the story’s potential. I have also heard great things about the characters though.

Libby Cole Author — Thu, 24 Sep 2015 22:11:30 +0000

Shame about the lack of storytelling, fairly crucial!